Penn essay help!!!

<p>ok I wrote my Penn essay (12-font, 1.5 space, 1 page) and I need some feedback on it. Can anyone help?</p>

<p>sure…i’ll take a look if you want…just PM me :)</p>

<p>sure, pm me if you want :)</p>

<p>whoops posted twice sorry</p>

<p>yeah same here
i’ll read it if u like</p>