<p>Well, i really need help on mine because it seems to be excessively wordy and unfocused. The deadline is almost up and I'm sick of being apprehensive. For someone to read, give criticism, and make suggestions will make me forever grateful.</p>
<p>Well, i really need help on mine because it seems to be excessively wordy and unfocused. The deadline is almost up and I'm sick of being apprehensive. For someone to read, give criticism, and make suggestions will make me forever grateful.</p>