Personal Statements

<p>I have two essays I wrote, but I can't decide which one to choose.</p>

<p>These are rough drafts, & I can use some feedback on grammar & content.</p>

<p>I'm not looking for "pity" per se, just want to describe hardships & how I've grown?</p>

<p>I'd prefer if it wasn't 09'ers, but any feedback is welcome.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>I'll read them, but I am an 09. Ummm, I promise I won't steal your essays. Really, no matter how good they are. That's all you can go on, though.</p>

<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="hint:%20i'm%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often">/email</a></p>

<p>not an 09-er.</p>

<p>I'm an 09'er, if you care to, I'll be happy to read it. I might not have time to check grammar (unless it's glaring), but I'll be more than willing to give pointers about the overall theme.</p>

<p>i'd love to read and help</p>

<p>Two of you were very helpful.</p>

<p>I'll remake a thread when I edit this one essay more!</p>