Please be brutal on my Yale Supplement?

College Essays
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<p>I would like some critiques for my supplement essay to Yale (which I will also be using for the Harvard supplement). Please, experienced essay reviewers and frequent posters. I want it to bleed. :]</p>

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<p>violence isn't a good thing o_o
but i'll look over it if you want</p>

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<p>me .</p>

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<p>Haha - I'd be good at that I think.</p>

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<p>I'll evaluate your essay if your willing to evaluate mine.</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>im here for you! would you be able to read one of mine?</p>

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<p>Crunkk, if your talking to me then yes. But it would be nice if you can help me out too :D</p>

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<p>send it to me</p>

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<p>Thanks for your help! =]</p>

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<p>i'll do it, just sent in my yale app today :)</p>

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<p>i can look it over for you if you'd like.
i'm not applying to yale anyway...brown all the way. jk :)</p>

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<p>pm it to me :D no stealie :P</p>

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<p>I got into Yale EA :)
I can comment on it if you want
PM me
Good luck!</p>

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<p>PM me. I need to brutalize someone else's work other than my own at the moment.</p>

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<p>PM me. Got in Yale last year. Currently Harvard '12!</p>

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<p>I'll read it. Got in Yale SCEA. Congrats Yale2013Girl.</p>

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<p>if its not too late, I'll take a peek.</p>

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<p>you can PM me... i have (almost) finished my own essays so I can help with some comments</p>

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<p>I'll take a look-see
eh?</p>

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<p>send it over</p>