<p>Hey guys, first-time poster. Feels like progress. lol. </p>
<p>I just typed up my common app essay. Don't be scared, I know its not nearly ready for shipment yet. I'm looking for ways to improve it, and would really love to hear your opinions.
I think my main problem is at the end, trying to tie it in to explain myself and the lesson I learned. Also, I really don't like the title too much. Thanks a lot!</p>
<p>I also have one other essay that I wrote for the essay prompt of why I'm interested in a career in healthcare, what qualities and experiences I have that would help me as a doctor in the future, and what I would learn from becoming a doctor. </p>
<p>I'll gladly read yours and offer thoughts. Thanks a lot! :D</p>