Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experience

College Essays
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<p>Is there anything wrong with this style of elaborating your extracurricular activity?.</p>

<p>There is something fascinating about them, about those tiny protruding, shiny pins, about those small coloured circles around the resisters, about the black, scratchless ICs, about the round cylinderical tubes with electrodes and strange dielectrics. They simply rapture my heart. The sizzling sound produced when you solder the flux coated pins or electrodes onto the circuit board or the smoke that rises from evaporation of the well applied flux that tickles your nose is simply amazing.
I love electronics and circuits. They have always been there since I can remember. They are connected with me more than merely during science fairs or physics classroom. My fascination for electronics is deeply rooted inside me.</p>

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<p>It is one of the best EC answer I have read till date. Good job mate…</p>

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<p>expand on that, but so far good</p>

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<p>Please don’t post your essay like this in an open forum
Chances are that you might get ripped off by someone!</p>

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<p>@specific: thanks. That flattered me.
@ Lynda : Thanks for the offer but, this is merely a draft that I just typed within a few minutes to get suggestion whether this sort of narration is allowed or not.
@kakaako: only 1000 chars allowed and thats already nearly 700 chars. but i will consider that too.
@DarthSpawnus: I am not an idiot. The EC I am going to talk is sth else. I just wanted to get an idea about “style”. Thanks for the concern.</p>