Please critique/edit my essay...desperate!

Please go here and read my essay…it is for Northwestern…got less than 3 hours left. it’s 100 words over! help!

<p>ur essay's excellent! (maybe it's also my bias for being in a similar situation! except that i'm not korean but nigerian-but it's the same!)
the only way u could reduce words is maybe shorten the airport part-but that'd b really hard 2 do n also if it's not a computer app they may allow some leeway on word count</p>

<p>hey i'll read it..if you still need help PM me</p>