Please critique my Princeton supplementary essay!

College Essays
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<p>Hi to all! Could someone read my Princeton main essay? It's 650 words. Any help would be greatly appreciated!</p>

<p>"Tell us about a person who has influenced you in a significant way."</p>

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<p>I am a parent and would be happy to read and provide feedback.</p>

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<p>I would be happy to critique it :)</p>

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<p>Happy to read your essay - I am a parent.</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to critique</p>

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<p>I can take a look!</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>I’ll to check it out.</p>

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<p>I can read and give feedback!</p>

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<p>I can check it out if you still need feedback.</p>

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<p>Me a parent and D in college.I can have a look if you wish</p>

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<p>ill read</p>

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<p>Bump</p>