<p>Hey guys,
I just finished one of my many drafts for the yale supplement essay. I would really like it if someone would be willing to read and comment on it. I'm mostly concerned with relevance and grammar/spelling errors. </p>
<p>the topic of the essay is: You have already told us about yourself in the Common Application, with its list of activities, Short Answer, and Personal Essay. In this required second essay, tell us something that you would like us to know about you that we might not get from the rest of your application - or something that you would like a chance to say more about. Please limit your essay to fewer than 500 words. </p>
<p>thanks! and good luck.</p>