Yale Supplement

College Essays
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<p>I am looking someone with writing experience to provide me with an honest critique of my Yale supplement essay. It's about a very small and seemingly insignificant moment and really introspective/detailed (well, as detailed as 500 words can be). I think it has a lot of potential, and I would like a second pair of eyes to point out any little things that I can improve before I submit. Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it.</p>

3

<p>i’d like to read it and give you feedback.</p>

4

<p>I’ll read it</p>

5

<p>I’ll proofread and advise.</p>

6

<p>I’ll read through it if you’re still looking for a reader. I’m a senior applying to colleges this year as well but am not applying to Yale.</p>

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<p>Send away :)</p>