please grade my two sat essays :)))

so i’m taking the sat with essay this saturday and would appreciate if someone could please grade the two i would appreciate it, i’m dumb and thought you could upload a photo so please dm me if you would be willing to do this :)))

yes my username is a movie reference

How did you know what the passage would be in advance?

Although I cannot grade your writings, I will offer a critique.

oh i don’t know what it will be, i just did a practice essay of another article so that i could practice the format of the essay, sorry for any confusion!!