<p>I haven't let anyone read my essays because I feel so uncomfortable letting people read what I've written.
My essay is a little risky- it's on child beating, corporal punishment and how I dealt with the whole scenario. I think I've dramatized it a bit but it really had such a profound impact on me- I shudder just thinking about it. I just really need to know how other people would feel about my essay.
And since everyone out here is a face-less somebody, I'm comfortable letting peole read it-
So, PLEASE, please, does anyone want to read my essay??
PLEASE, I DESPERATELY need some feed-back!</p>
<p>PM me. Be forewarned though, I hope you've focused on what you've learnt. Nothing more I hate more than empty fluff.</p>
<p>ooh thanks! anyone else?</p>
<p>hey PM me. I will see what i can do.</p>
<p>bump anyone else please?
Did I mention that it's got a lot of visual imagery,similes and metaphors... Now if that doesn't entice you, nothing will. (joking)</p>
<p>This person is incredibly rude. Upon receiving the essay, s/he/it spammed me with another PM the next day. Look, I don't have all the time in the world. Next, the person sent me an extremely irritating PM:
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Have you read my essay? Do you have any comments? If you haven't read it , then I demand that you delete the essay from your computer. DO NOT plagiarize my essay<a href="bolding%20is%20done%20by%20me">/quote</a></p>