<p>Hey guys, </p>
<p>iIm new to this and I have to submit my college applications for NW and georgetown tomorrow. I had finished my senior personal essay a couple of weeks ago. I loved it, but everyone I showed it to did not like it. I don't want to post it on this site, but if there is ANYONE already in college that could help me decide what to do with it, how to make it good, etc. I really could use the help. please tell me if you are interested, thanks soo much!</p>