Please Help with Common App!

<p>basically i've got the big essay done right now minus a concluding paragraph that completely wraps it up....cept i've got a huge writer's block right now so i wanna first make sure the beginning of it's decent.</p>

<p>i'm kind of scared that its really convoluted and unclear as to what i'm saying... anyone wanna take a stab at it?</p>

<p>yes ill do it if you like. PM me</p>

<p>sure, send it to me</p>