<p>Ok, so yeah. I just finished my common app essay (semi-rough draft). So, would anybody care to read it? I've shown it to a few people. Most liked it, but some said it seemed a bit scattered. Oh, there may or may not be a few grammar mistakes but that's just because I have yet to hammer out everything. </p>
<p>I'm a bit nervous about doing this so I'll probably only send my essay to CCers I know I can trust. But if you're interested, please let me know. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>