Please read my common app essay!

<p>Hey everyone! So I'm applying to Penn ED and before I send out my app I want someone to just read my common app essay and make sure its alright. I feel that it doesn't say enough about myself but I don't know what else to add. Let me know if you would like to read and I will inbox you my essay.
Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>I’ll read it over if you want</p>

<p>PM it over:)</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you’d like.</p>

<p>Yep, been reading tons of Common App essays recently so send it through PM if you want :)</p>

<p>I have already finished my common app essay, but if you want I can read your essay.</p>

<p>i’ll read it! Sent it over.</p>

<p>Please PM I would like to read it :D</p>