<p>Hi everyone!
I have a common app essay and I want my essay to be as strong as it can possibly be.
I would really appreciate it if anyone would be willing to read my essay and give me some feedback
PM me or comment down below
Thank you!</p>
<p>i am a willing reader. </p>
<p>I can read it</p>
<p>Sure. I am a college freshman @ Penn, and am busy w/ mid terms, but I will get back to you shortly</p>