Common app essay 4 review

<p>Hi is anybody interested in reading my essay to the 4th prompt "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?" id really appreciate feedback and critique. My place is the piano (so you can get an idea of my essay). Thanks in advance</p>

<p>feed back would be appreciated </p>

<p>I’d be willing to help if you still need it</p>

<p>Send it over.</p>