Rate my essay on common app prompt 4!

<p>Here is the prompt: Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?</p>

<p>I wrote an essay on this, and I'm aiming for the elite schools. If anyone would like to read and give commentary, I would be glad to do the same! Pm me</p>

<p>I dont got time to read your essay, but for top schools make sure that the common app essay is original and unique as possible! </p>

<p>i think its original! thanks for the help though hopefully someone else canr ead it</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it! PM me</p>

<p>sent</p>

<p>i can take a look at it </p>