Anyone want to read my Commonapp essay? Very personal

College Essays
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<p>Can anyone please read my common app essay? its very personal and i do not want any of my friends to read it. Also, i'm hispanic and both of my parents are immigrants so their mastery of english is not that good, so i cant ask them to read it either. I you want to read it, ill PM it to you</p>

<p>Can you guys tell me if its good and proofread it for any mistakes.</p>

<p>BTW. This is a very rough draft. I literally just finished writing it.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance</p>

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<p>o yea. its the first essay choice. Evaluate an experience and its impact</p>

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<p>Yea sure…PM it to me…will be an honest critique</p>

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<p>i’d love to read it</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll read it. PM it to me and I’ll give u feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure PM me and i’ll help you with it…but please, please, send the prompt too–that’d be really helpful.</p>