<p>I don't want to jeapordize my chances at any school by possibly offending an essay reader (who should be unbiased though!), but I just feel like this essay really is something I'm passionate about and means alot to me. Let me know if you'll read it, and I"ll PM it to you. Thanks!</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>i can help</p>
<p>I'll take a look</p>
<p>I'llll read!</p>
<p>sure pm me</p>