sos
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<p>Its about 600 words
I'm not too worried about the context or how strong my topic is-although feedback and opinions are welcome</p>
<p>im more concerned about grammer mistakes (commas, run-on sent.)
or if something doesnt make sense.</p>
<p>thanks</p>
<p>I can have a look. pm me.</p>
makam
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<p>I'll read it for you.</p>
<p>i will read it too</p>
<p>PM me! I'll take a look...</p>
sos
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<p>i need more feedback!!!
only a couple of the readers gave me comments
thanks</p>
<p>you haven't sent it to me yet. if you're still looking for readers, ill be willing to comment on it.</p>
<p>i'll read it! Just PM me soon!</p>