<p>This is my very first draft. I wrote on the topic: Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?
It would be very appreciated if anyone can read it over and critique my essay. Please tell me if it answers the question or if the content is clear enough. Give me any suggestions, criticisms, and corrections. I will be applying to Ivy schools so please comment on it!!
Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>I will read it and provide some remarks</p>
<p>Just pm it to me</p>
<p>Sure, PM it!</p>
<p>Sure , i’ll read</p>
<p>Sure 
I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I will read it and try to critique it for you.</p>
<p>I can give it a go!</p>
<p>I can read it if you want. I don’t think you can PM yet, so just reply and I’ll PM you my email or something.</p>
<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>
<p>PM me ill read it</p>