<p>Honestly, I am a bad writer.
I do believe I have solid ideas but I'm having problems wording my thoughts out.
Can you please read it and give me honest feedback's? I take criticisms well.</p>
<p>I wrote one essay for two distinct yet similar prompts.
"Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?" (UC prompt #2)
and "Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you." (common app prompt #1).</p>
<p>I'll send PM's.
Thank you!</p>