<p>Anyone willing to read my essay? My application is due tomorrow and I need feedback on my essay! I am not sure which prompt this answer's to more, but I think it can go for either one. Please give feedback on the essay and tell me which prompt you think it goes along with more. Thanks!!</p>
<p>1st prompt:Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>2nd prompt: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>