Please Read over my essay

Applying to College
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<p>This is the commonapp essay ...I think the essay contains grammatical mistakes. Could somebody please correct it and also comment about the content.PLEASE..I'll pm it to you , if you reply</p>

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<p>i</a> can help</p>

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<p>pm it to me plz</p>

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<p>pm it to me.</p>

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<p>Bump.....Anyone Else...</p>

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<p>yeah, but i recommend essayedge.com. pm over</p>

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<p>i can help</p>

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<p>I'll look at it.</p>

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<p>pm me if you want to...</p>