<p>I'd really appreciate it if someone could take a quick look at my scholarship essay. The prompt was "Write about an experience when you realized you were growing up." I figured a lot of people would write about getting their license, first job, first day of senior year or high school, etc, so I figured I'd try to take a slightyly different approach. It's not super out there or anything, but I hope it 's enought to stand out. It's not extremely long, just about 873 words. I have to have it at the post office by 4 so getting a review ASAP would be great! Just comment and I'll send it to you.</p>
<p>Thanks!
Amanda</p>
<p>Really left yourself a lot of time there, huh? What happens if it needs a lot of work? I’ve only read about two essays so far that didn’t have 10+ errors.</p>
<p>Yeah, well the whole thing is a long shot anyway. The chances of me getting it are very slim. Usually my 32 ACT would help me out with stuff like this but there’s an ACT score requirement of 30 and 3.8 GPA requirement to even be eligible so everyone will have similar stats. But I figure it’s worth a shot. And it’s been edited by one person already, I’m just looking for a final sweep. If you’d be willing to take a look I would appreciate it.</p>
<p>Well, since your name is so polite, go ahead and PM it.</p>
<p>Ok great, THANK YOU!</p>