Please see my Common App essay?

I’ve written my Common App essay. I chose the first prompt: "Some students have a background, talent…if that sounds like you, please share your story.
Would anyone like to take a look? I’ll appreciate ANY feedback.

I’ll read it, PM me

I would like to help!

I wanna give feedback :open_mouth:

I’ll read it too!!!

I’d be willing to read

I’d love to help!