My D’s main essay, submitted to all the schools she applied to, focused on her leadership in her Acapella group.
D was actively involved throughout HS in student government, drama and choir. She was the lead in the HS musical and president of the school. She founded the HS’s first co-ed acappella group and ran it for 4 years. She made All State for voice and had a strong art portfolio as well. She had strong grades (top 5%) and was on the board of several clubs related to music and drama.
In her application D wanted to highlight that she was a talented singer and a strong leader. She wanted that to be the take away, her “label.”
She wrote her essay about acappella because she was able to imply that she was musically talented and was able to illustrate her leadership as she recounted her experience with the group. The essay started with her describing the group’s first meeting at our home and how frightening it was to face her peers and take charge. It ended with the last acappella meeting at our home and her mixed feelings as a graduating senior moving on and leaving the group’s future in the hands of others. In the middle were favorite accomplishments–singing at various venues, encouraging shy members to take on solos, mentoring others to lead the group.
They say “show don’t tell” in your essays and D’s essay did a great job of doing that. She did not commit to studying music or getting involved in acappella music in college in her essay. The essay was an excellent representation of how she spent a great deal of her time in HS and created an accurate representation of my D as a person.
She sent arts supplements at schools that accepted them (Barnard did not accept them at the time D applied.)
She applied for music scholarship where applicable. Some required her to major or minor, others required some vocal participation on campus, other schools had no requirements at all for talent scholarships.
In addition, she got a number of merit scholarships that were based on leadership and I’m sure her essay helped with those as well.
At an interview at Brandeis with admissions on campus, she was asked to show the website she created for the acappella group and the interviewer played clips of the group singing. It showed the group singing the Star Spangled Banner at a Staten Island Yankee game and singing at an assisted living. (She was accepted and received a $15K Dean’s merit scholarship without any obligation to commit to any EC’s or major on campus.)
So my suggestion is to have your children think about how involvement in the arts promoted their growth and involvement in HS. Then use that in their essays. I would also encourage them to think of how they can use dance or the arts for fund raising or for mentorship.
Good luck to all!