<p>Good afternoon everyone,
• There are not enough words to express my pride of being born in Tunisia and living my first eighteen years in this fascinating country. Maybe Tunisia is not as diverse as the United States or as broad as China, but it’s a country where I spent my childhood and had the most tasteful memories. During my entire life, Tunisia was my biggest supporter. The land where Hannibal lived, where people created their freedom and defeated dictatorship inspiring the whole world with their courage and bravery, has never and will never stop inspiring me during my struggle in life.
Do this answer the prompt?</p>
<p>This is terribly generic. There’s nothing in your essay that couldn’t be found in a Wikipedia entry or tourism brochure about Tunisia. I’ve been to Tunisia as only a tourist, and I could come up w something more personal than this.</p>
<p>Completely rewrite it. </p>
<p>@GMTplus7</p>
<p>I think its interesting how after we reads enough essays, we become kinda finicky and picky about essays; basically we end up putting ourselves exactly in the admissions officer’s shoes. </p>