Plz help with my essays. 3 to go

<p>These are 3 essays for 3 schools that I'm going to apply which is Purdue, Umass and Michigan state. I hope everyone can help me a hand :).</p>

<p>its called "writing one that will cover all"</p>

<p>oh I mean if anyone can read my essays and give me some advices :P</p>