<p>I have just finished writing my essay for the common application. I've been working on it for months now. Before I left for winter break, I showed it to my English teacher and he thought it was very good except for the fact that it needs a better conclusion. He said that it ended without resolution so I had to find a way to conclude it on a positive note. So I've really put so many hours, practically all of my vacation of this one essay trying to give it the ending that it deserves. Now I think I've finished it and I'm ready to submit it but I'm not sure if its really ready to go. Could some kind parents please read it and give me some advice on what they think about it? I'd really appreciate it. :)</p>
<p>I can read it, pm me!</p>
<p>I would really refrain from sending my essay to another student</p>
<p>Any parents out there willing to read it? I promise it won't take long.</p>
<p>I'll be happy to take a look.</p>