<p>I am really struggling with my college apps right now. I want to apply early, but I need to finish my essay by the 15th to make one of my deadlines. I have posted this in the Essay forum and got many responses, but only 2 people have given me feedback. My counselor seems to think everything I do is "perfect" so she is useless when it comes to this kind of thing. I would ask my English teacher but I don't have English this semester adn my teacher from last year retired. </p>
<p>So please parents........it would be really helpful if you could read it and give some kind of feedback.</p>