princeton supplemental essay! (it's either really deep or it doesn't make sense)

<p>hey guys! i need help really badly. I just wrote my essay and I have no idea whether its good or bad. I would really appreciate it if someone could give me some feedback on my essay. thanks!</p>

<p>ill take a look</p>

<p>I'll read it and give you timely feedback.</p>

<p>haha, i can take a look as well.</p>

<p>I'll take a look.</p>

<p>I'll read tonight..
I will warn you though, I am quite harsh.</p>