**Decision: Accepted **
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1480 (740 M, 740 R)
ACT: 28 (did not submit)
SAT II: 660 (Lit, US History) & 610 (Math 1- did not send)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.94
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 3/150
AP (place score in parenthesis): World History (4), English Literature (3), US History (3)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Calculus AB, AP Environmental Science, AP English Language, AP United States Government and Politics, Journalism, Drama
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel, etc.): N/A
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Black Student Union (3 years), Earth Club (3 years), Student Council (2 years), Senior Committee President (1 year), M.E.Ch.A. (1 year), Tutoring every year for multiple classes
Job/Work Experience: N/A
Volunteer/Community service: Beach clean-ups with Earth Club
Summer Activities: Two-week immersion program at Harvard in 2016; California college tour; vacationing
Essays: Common App (7/10), Princeton Supplement (8/10), Princeton Engineering (N/A)
Teacher Recommendations: English teacher (9/10)- I’ve known her all 4 years and she says I’m one of the best students she has ever had the privilege to teach; Science teacher (7/10)- I’ve only known her since 10th grade & don’t have a super close relationship with her, but we are very friendly with each other. Like my other rec, I’ve been taught by her in a regular and an AP class, so I think she was able to vouch for my academic prowess over 2 years
Counselor Rec: (9/10)- She’s amazing. I’m super close to her and always seem to be in her office to talk about, well, anything! She knows my mom very well and really likes me.
Additional Rec: (7/10)- My college counselor from my CBO wrote it. I’ve known him for over half a year. I imagine it was good but nothing special.
Interview: (7/10)- Nothing special. I had a polite man, but I was really nervous and it showed. I stuttered and wasn’t as smooth as I normally am in a regular conversation.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Psychology
State (if domestic applicant): California
Country (if international applicant): N/A
School Type: Public (Charter)
Ethnicity (Hispanic Y/N/not reported): No
Race(s) (AI/AN, Asian, AA, NH/PI, White, not reported): African-American
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: <$25,000
Hooks/tips (URM, athlete, legacy, 1st gen, etc.): URM, poor, inner-city high school
Reflection
Strengths: ESSAYS definitely- I cried while I was working on them to get the emotion just right. Also had the highest SAT score at my school (1480). The second highest was 70-100 points below me, and they didn’t even apply. Maybe mentioning that I was a Gates Semifinalist helped me too.
Weaknesses: Subject Test scores. Kind of low for an Ivy, not gonna lie. My AP Scores suck as well, but the other parts of my application make up for that.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Diversity, SAT score (in relation to my race), personality in essays.
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: N/A
Where else are you applying for RD: I applied to UCs (Berkeley, LA, Santa Barbara, Santa Cruz), CSUs (Long Beach, Pomona, San Diego, San Jose), and Harvard already. I plan on applying to Columbia and Yale as well. Hoping I can find a way to retract my applications from my CSUs. Gonna keep my UCs.
General Comments:
I’m also part of a CBO that takes only the top 15% of certain high schools in my area. They supplied me with SAT prep, flew me out to the east coast for free, and took me on a road trip around California to look at colleges. The counselors are so helpful and helped me polish my essays. I couldn’t be more thankful.
Tips: Shoot your shot! A guy I knew from my school (first gen, low income, interested in STEM) last year got a 1570 (the highest ever at my school) and was still rejected from Harvard, Princeton, Stanford, Brown, and many other places. He was, fortunately, accepted to UPenn, but opted to stay in-state for personal reasons. My scores are lower than his, I didn’t take summer classes for credit like him, and somehow I was still able to get into Princeton!
Pour your heart out in these essays. Try not to sound robotic. Sometimes it’s okay to be colloquial or talk about things that are generally uncomfortable. My essay was about being called a racial slur by a group of older white men while I was in Texas (not passing any judgment here, just describing my essay lol). I imagine it may have been slightly uncomfortable for anyone to read that. But perhaps taking that risk- being unafraid to go there and put myself out there for Princeton to see- was something that distinguished me from other applicants.
Also, I know people already say it a lot but work on your scores. I know the SAT/ACT isn’t a very accurate way to demonstrate one’s abilities given all of the limitations, but it’s a universal test in colleges’ eyes that helps compare you to everyone else. You want to be in a good position to where you aren’t worried about that factor of your application holding you back. They aren’t the most important thing but they do help a lot.
I wish the best of luck to current and future applicants! If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.