Proofread my essay, please.

<p>With the help of my teacher, I was able to revise most of my essay but I want you guys to read and tell me if it's ready to go. I would love any advice or comments on grammatical issues and contents. Just post a message here and I'll PM the essay over. Thanks.</p>

<p>Anyone willing?</p>

<p>ahh I'll give it the once-over.</p>

<p>PM it to me =) I was the editor-in-chief last year so I hopefully I'll be able to provide some help</p>

<p>I can give it a read</p>

<p>I'll gladly read it and give you suggestions.</p>

<p>I'll do it</p>