Is this a bad topic? It regards losing a position of importance but gaining it back (in a group/organization)
It could be good. Remember that your essay is to tell them something revealing about you that they can’t pick up elsewhere in your application or letters of rec. The best essay can turn on a small story that gives them a sense of you as a person. Also, remember that they read hundreds of esssys. Ideally you want to stand out a little.
Does it “Give them a reason to say yes”??? If so, then go with it. But make sure you focus far more on YOU than on your position within the organization-- on what you learned, on how you’ve grown as a result of this experience.
@bjkmom Alright thanks!