<p>whats more important about your essay : </p>
<p>the style/grammar/tone in which you write it in</p>
<p>or the actual content of it(what you are trying to say about yourself)</p>
<p>i think it's different for every college...
(for example : UCSD ppl said that they focus more on the content then the style of the essay...)</p>
<p>but try to do best in general/// on both parts... for... obvious reasons???? ;)</p>
<p>everything dude, everything</p>