<p>I am applying to the Ivy Leagues and Stanford. I have attempted both prompt 2 and 5 but I think my prompt 2 essay is better. I will send you my prompt 2 essay unless you are willing to read both. I can rate yours back if you want. Many thanks! :)</p>
<p>For your information, the prompt 2 topic is: Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn. While the prompt 5 one is: Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.
Thanks!</p>
<p>I can help: <a href="mailto:huangittf@126.com">huangittf@126.com</a></p>
<p>Hey I’ll read and I also need some critique</p>
<p>I’ll read it for you if you want!
Just pm me :)</p>
<p>Thank you guys! 
However, I realize I can’t pm my essay as “Private messaging is enabled only for members who have 15 or more posts.”–Collegeconfidential. I’m trying hard to post more and yet useful posts. May take a while. Many thanks! :)</p>