Read my common app essay I wrote in 20 minutes!

College Essays
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<p>So, i've been struggling with this essay for weeks now. I have written numerous that I just don't seem to like. But tonight, I decided to just sit down and write. Would anyone be willing to read it and give your opinion on it? </p>

<p>Probably no one from the class of 2015, just to be safe.
(: Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>PM me…i’d be interested to have a look…(I’m also jobless…:p)</p>

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<p>Me too.PL#ease do PM me.I feel I have loads to learn on app essays.Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>i can take a look… PM</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>PM me. If you want constructive criticism.</p>

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<p>PM it over! I’m a college student. :)</p>

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<p>Thanks guys. I’m trying to be safe about who I send it to, so I didn’t send it to everyone but thanks for the offers. If anyone else would be willing to read it, let me know.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you if you’d like. I’ve already graduated high school btw.</p>

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<p>I’ll give some critique. It’s not a supplement essay, so I don’t mind.</p>

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<p>I can help =)</p>

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<p>I can help with grammar and give you my impressions. :)</p>

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<p>PM me as well, I’d love to read what can accomplished in 20 minutes xD</p>