<p>I'm thinking about doing a new version of my common app essay, and am wondering if anyone would like to read it and give me their gut feedback of it?</p>
<p>Thanks! :)</p>
<p>bump, this went to the 2nd page fast lol!</p>
<p>PM me when ur finished with it.</p>
<p>I should have made myself clearer - I have finished it, I'm just not sure if I want to use it. :)</p>
<p>bump, I need 1-2 more opinions :)</p>
<p>ill read it.</p>
<p>oh, sounds fun :]
want to look at mine too?</p>
<p>^Same as anhtimmy.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>