Read my common app essay please...it has reindeers

College Essays
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<p>I can PM you the essay, if you're willing to read it.</p>

<p>Its just the first draft, and I want to see what takeaways/opinions people have from it so far.</p>

<p>Its at about 660 words too, so any advice on consolidating or cutting it down would be very much appreciated.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Anyone??</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>Reindeers?! How cool … I’ll give you feedback.</p>

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<p>send it over with the prompt and the schools that you wish to apply to</p>

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<p>Thanks, sent it over to you both</p>

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<p>Bump…</p>

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<p>i could do it</p>

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<p>I can read it. Please PM me with the prompt and school(s)</p>

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<p>I’d love to!! :D</p>

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<p>Thank you, I sent it.</p>

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<p>@Buck46</p>

<p>CC won’t let me PM until I’ve reached 15 posts. I’ll get back to you ASAP.</p>

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<p>Hey I can help pm it to me, :D</p>

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<p>please read mine, in has brownies :D</p>

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<p>sure 10char</p>

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<p>Please send me one :P</p>