Read my essay and feel good inside!

Applying to College
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<p>Since Mondays are my official college applications days, I thought I'd get some feedback. I have four essays right now:</p>

<p>the longer common app one that seems to be going nowhere (on not shopping at WalMart and eating dinner with people from Tibet)
the shorter common app one that is WAY too long (on figure skating)
the Bowdoin supplemental (On a TV show...)
National Merit essay (could potentially turn in to the common app. essay)</p>

<p>Any feedback would be much appreciated. I'll PM any (or all if you're really generous) of the essays to you and love you very much....</p>

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<p>you have too much time</p>

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<p>"you have too much time"</p>

<p>what?</p>

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<p>haha. maybe you do. i'll read some or all. but if you send me all, it'll take me longer to get back to you. i really like editing...it's fun...yeah.</p>

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<p>I'll read 'em all. Because I hate Walmart too. PM!</p>

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<p>Ahahaha. Funny. I'll read & critique a couple.
Or PM me them all, and I'll critique as much as I can get done.</p>

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<p>lol. ill give feedback. sounds like fun topics!</p>

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<p>Thanks for the help!</p>

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<p>pm me your essay and I'll give you my opinions</p>

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<p>(: Good reads.</p>