how about writing ,editing, and submitting your OWN essay? these desperate applicants that want the world to assess and scrub, the reassess and re-edit, and proofread their essay are JOKE. how about doing your own work? you make your own mistakes. you succeed or fail ON YOUR OWN some of the essays i’ve read are a ridiculous amalgamation of teachers,counselors,principals,parents, parent’s subordinates at work,phds, and computer program’s input intead of the applicant. it has become a joke. i can’t believe the admission people are naive enough to not see through what has become some kind of worldwide essay-generating machine, but maybe they are.
You do realize that some of these people do not have the resources to pay someone to edit their work? Some of these people do not have parents willing or able to read over it either? That some schools have 500 students per guidance counselor? That some English teachers are incompetent and or mean? That college essays, at highly selective schools, can be the determining factor as to who gets in and who does not?
Do you also not realize that admissions officers can see every applicants English grades, and writing subscore of the SAT or ACT, and judge accordingly if the essay is legit…or not?