Read my essay to Harvard!

<p>So I'm an international applying for the class of 2011 later in the fall. I've tried to avoid flamboyant SAT words and be "showing" in this honest and short essay written in narrative form and would now like to hear your comments on it. It's very important that you leave a comment on it and not just read. Send me a PM.</p>

<p>ok i'll check it out</p>

<p>Alright got a first one there and sent. Anyone else? Don't be shy now.</p>

<p>Sure, why not?</p>

<p>pm me, I'll have a look.</p>

<p>Would love to: pm me.</p>

<p>sure pm me</p>

<p>sure, why not.</p>

<p>pm me please</p>

<p>PM me too.</p>

<p>i have some time to kill.</p>

<p>if i get into harvard, it's gonna be my essays that got me in =D. pm me if u like</p>

<p>sure, pm it over</p>

<p>I want to!</p>

<p>I'll check it, too. I've sent mine already, so no plagiarism. Where are you from? I am from Germany and China.</p>

<p>Ok so I've sent it to alot of people now but the comments havent dropped in yet. I'm Somalian.</p>

<p>I'm not really afraid of plagiarism since the essay is based both on my work and EC and this EC isn't your average-joe-school-newspaper thingy so to say.</p>

<p>Interested. PM me please.</p>

<p>pm me please</p>

<p>Corporate- was there a prompt for the essay or was it topic of your choice?</p>