<p>Hi CC, I'm looking for some feedback on my essay that I submitted to Princeton this past year. I'd prefer accepted students/ alumni/ parents to read it, but I guess I'll accept anybody if you promise not to distribute the essay online. I chose the "person who influenced you" option. Thanks!</p>
<p>P.S. I know that this won't change anything, but I'd just like some feedback all the same.</p>