Read my "Why College" Essay

<p>I wrote one for Rutgers, but am planning on using it for other schools as well. The prompt is basically "How will you benefit from our environment? How will you contribute?". </p>

<p>Any feedback would be nice!!</p>

<p>I prefer college students to reply, but anyone is fine.</p>

<p>I could take a look</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>sure im bored :)</p>

<p>why not? Im in AP Lit for a reason.</p>

<p>I'll look at it for you. I won't be applying to Rutgers.</p>

<p>Send it over!!</p>

<p>could i read it..pm me</p>

<p>Pm me!!....</p>

<p>yah, PM me too.</p>

<p>yup yup pm it over!</p>

<p>i will give it a shot</p>

<p>PM me? Would you mind reading mine as well? I'm not applying to Rutgers.</p>

<p>ill read!! pm it too me!!</p>

<p>any more willing participants?</p>

<p>send it over and i'll try to help</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it if you want me to</p>

<p>bring it in!</p>

<p>I'll take a look. Feel free to PM me and I will feedback.</p>

<p>I'll look at it if you agree to read my MIT (ITS REAL GOOD..or atleast thats what my teachers say) essay. Pm me and ill pm you my essay.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>