<p>i'd love to get feedback... with the 600 character limit, it was tough :(
if there's anyone up for it (who's not applying to columbia/isn't a high school senior) i'd be really grateful.</p>
<p>im a high school senior but im not applyin to columbia..
u can send it to me and i can take look at it</p>
<p>PM me, I can give you constructive criticism.</p>