Rejected from Cornell. Feedback needed on commonapp essay.

College Essays
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<p>So as the title suggests I was rejected from Cornell. It definitely came as a shock to me as I think my application was good enough for Cornell and my only doubts are on my commonapp essay. Can someone please have a look at it and provide some essential feedback? Reply and I'll PM you. Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>sure send it over</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. Could you help me read mine too?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I can read it</p>

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<p>I can also read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, too!</p>

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<p>I’d love to look it over.</p>

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<p>ill read it
pm me</p>