Review my essay? I'll swap

College Essays
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<p>I have 4 essays (ranging from 250 words to 500 words) and need them edited. PLEASE be harsh. Rip it apart. Eat it alive. I need as much constructive criticism as I can get.</p>

<p>The more people editing, the merrier.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>sure just PM me and i’ll send you mine</p>

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<p>Anyone elseee? :)</p>

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<p>I’ll do a swap: I’ll edit four if you edit four of mine. =) Email me at <a href="mailto:cwild2458@gmail.com">cwild2458@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Awesome! I have exactly four, too. Perfect (:</p>

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<p>i’ll read it too! all my apps are in and i’m trying to help people. PM me.</p>

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<p>Thanks a lot for your help! (:</p>

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<p>i’ll swap with you, just pm me if you still want to</p>

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<p>swap one for one.</p>

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<p>I can edit for you!</p>

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<p>Awesome! Thanks guys for all the help!</p>

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<p>Pm me,i’ll swap!</p>

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<p>please pm them to me! i have the same problem as u, not enough readers, not enough advice. i have found at least one error or suggestion with every essay i have read</p>

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<p>I’ll swap one for one. PM it to me.</p>